I really like the concept! My critique would be perhaps making the body a little closer to Marowak, and exaggerating on the bone armor silhouette. Most Mega designs keep the Pokemon body essentially the same so that it keeps the same DNA (making the silhouette too different turns it into a new Pokemon). Think of it like “same pokemon but its features are exaggerated somehow”
Sciophilia
I like the concept but it’s too humanoid so it looks closer to a digimon lol. Shorten the proportions to make it more similar to the Marowak and you’re done.
kp012202
The only obvious issues I see are that the two Pokémon have exactly the same body plan, and that they share their body plan with a whole other Pokémon that isn’t their own base form.
Mega Marowak X, Mega Marowak Y and Mewtwo look way, way too similar. One being similar to Mewtwo would probably be fine, but if you ask me, Mega Marowak X should probably have a stockier, more bulky frame to accentuate its physicality, and Mega Marowak Y may want to be smaller, so as to appear more nimble and able. The thing is, the difference in the bone armor just isn’t doing the job, and from the front there isn’t even a difference, so it’s not even doing as much as it could.
Great work, though!
paleoweeb74
I really like it’s Y Mega although it’s X Mega feels like it’s missing something . . .maybe add a ghostly fire to edge of its bone spear like how Alolan Marowak does? You can have the fire mimic how the spear tip is but with longer more needle like edges (I mean heck . . .to make it more similar to its Alolan counterpart you could even add spiritual fire on it’s skull and have it be like tribal face paint). Have the Mega Y evolution have a fire that burns physically while the Mega X evolution have a fire that burns spiritually/mentally, one fire burns the body (Y) while the other burns the soul (X).
SammSandwich
I kinda feel like they’re too tall and not different enough from each other but they look phenomenal
AliceThePastelWitch
This is waaay to busy for a Pokemon design. Even a mega evolution, the proportions also cause issues with readability as both a Pokemon and it’s own form it is very similar to Mewtwo in shape, like others said. This adds to the issue of the design feeling too busy, since even the most important legendaries don’t have this much on them. It honestly kind of looks more like a kobold that’s referencing Pokemon rather than a Marowak Mega
Angel_Fucking_Dust_6
Looks like mewtwo
Wild_Position7099
I actually want a Mega Marowak more than a mega Flygon!
Renellabsol
Do forgive me if I’m wrong but is this AI
Just something about it makes me feel like it is
EffectPutrid1588
feels a.i ngl
GeoCangrejo
Honestly not a fan of this. Feels too humanoid or like a Digimon
One3Two_
My design would change the skull more, with horns
Less humanoids, less bones
Art quality and talent? 9/10
Do i like it? Not really
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Is this AI?
I really like the concept! My critique would be perhaps making the body a little closer to Marowak, and exaggerating on the bone armor silhouette. Most Mega designs keep the Pokemon body essentially the same so that it keeps the same DNA (making the silhouette too different turns it into a new Pokemon). Think of it like “same pokemon but its features are exaggerated somehow”
I like the concept but it’s too humanoid so it looks closer to a digimon lol. Shorten the proportions to make it more similar to the Marowak and you’re done.
The only obvious issues I see are that the two Pokémon have exactly the same body plan, and that they share their body plan with a whole other Pokémon that isn’t their own base form.
Mega Marowak X, Mega Marowak Y and Mewtwo look way, way too similar. One being similar to Mewtwo would probably be fine, but if you ask me, Mega Marowak X should probably have a stockier, more bulky frame to accentuate its physicality, and Mega Marowak Y may want to be smaller, so as to appear more nimble and able. The thing is, the difference in the bone armor just isn’t doing the job, and from the front there isn’t even a difference, so it’s not even doing as much as it could.
Great work, though!
I really like it’s Y Mega although it’s X Mega feels like it’s missing something . . .maybe add a ghostly fire to edge of its bone spear like how Alolan Marowak does? You can have the fire mimic how the spear tip is but with longer more needle like edges (I mean heck . . .to make it more similar to its Alolan counterpart you could even add spiritual fire on it’s skull and have it be like tribal face paint). Have the Mega Y evolution have a fire that burns physically while the Mega X evolution have a fire that burns spiritually/mentally, one fire burns the body (Y) while the other burns the soul (X).
I kinda feel like they’re too tall and not different enough from each other but they look phenomenal
This is waaay to busy for a Pokemon design. Even a mega evolution, the proportions also cause issues with readability as both a Pokemon and it’s own form it is very similar to Mewtwo in shape, like others said. This adds to the issue of the design feeling too busy, since even the most important legendaries don’t have this much on them. It honestly kind of looks more like a kobold that’s referencing Pokemon rather than a Marowak Mega
Looks like mewtwo
I actually want a Mega Marowak more than a mega Flygon!
Do forgive me if I’m wrong but is this AI
Just something about it makes me feel like it is
feels a.i ngl
Honestly not a fan of this. Feels too humanoid or like a Digimon
My design would change the skull more, with horns
Less humanoids, less bones
Art quality and talent? 9/10
Do i like it? Not really