I made a lyric Video about Paper Mario; The origami king’s Vellumental boss fight, I hope you guys enjoy it and I’d appreciate it if I could get a response about what I did well and how i can improve upon this.

I made a lyric Video about Paper Mario; The origami king’s Vellumental boss fight, I hope you guys enjoy it and I’d appreciate it if I could get a response about what I did well and how i can improve upon this.