

Hi! Im relatively new but I wanted to know if anyone could help me improve these two a bit. I like their designs but I just want some help making them great!
[Context] They are a two stage line based off of Bioluminescent Plankton, similar to those glowing beaches along Florida and California. They communicate via sending different colors to eachother throught the ocean at night.
Any tips to help improve them is greatly appreciated. Thanks!
by Moosemelon_FS