Hi guys, wondering if i can pick your brains for some feedback on this one. Updated Insolape
Hi guys, wondering if i can pick your brains for some feedback on this one. Updated Insolape
by The_Monagerie
14 Comments
The_Monagerie
Hi all, I’d love a bit of feedback on this one, i kept working on this one after i uploaded originally and id love to know if you think this version is better? Im open to any critiques
Crustle_best_pokemon
Looks good, like the shiny.
I think it would help to make the skin a bit less pink
thegoldchicken
Holy shit it’s rajang (both of these designs are great btw)
CheatsySnoops
I think it could maybe have its hair stylized more like a mohawk or a pompadour and maybe the shiny’s skin could be light blue? Other than that, it looks pretty good!
Silveruleaf
Looks really cool
Comfy_Dan
I don’t have any issue with the design at all after reading peoples replies. I would say the pompadour would be a good idea.
Though for the sprite by itself, I think the pose could change. My thought is the raise one arm like it’s flexing, have it wink and give it a toothy half grin. It shouts “I’m strong and I know it. Do you want me, or to be me?”
Maybe even make it’s bellybutton grow a bit more bro some buff chest hairs
E4EHCO33501007
Ok remember how you were hesitant about exhilerapetion
Well what if I was a flying type with skin flaps it used like a wing suit
And it’s an adrenaline junkie who constantly tries to fly faster and faster in more and more dangerous situations
George_XIII
Love this mon! Muscle beefcake mons are some of my favorites. I love the posing as well.
1. I think the stripes on the ankles are a little arbitrary in terms of cohesion. Maybe some tufts of fur there with a matching patterning to the head would be more distinct?
2. I dont get rock at all from this design, is there something im missing from the aesthetic that evokes mountains or rocks? Mono fighting, fighting normal, and even fighting psychic make sense to me.
3. The diamond on its belly is dope, maybe that design can be implemented on the knees as well? Something to make it look a little more balanced in terms of where our eye is drawn. Either that or possibly even make the hair tuft / neck scruff even bigger to add a cartoonish affect.
Overall this is a great mon design and would go on my Buzzwole Machamp Bewear fighting gym team of bara pokemon anyday
nipplequeen69
I think it’s perfect. Looks like a real Pokémon!
RepresentativeLast66
i thought this was an electric type
TaxLoud8530
Looks nice!
FinanceEfficient7269
The pre evolution should be inspires by sung wukong
JCSwagoo
It looks like an electric type and has a bit too much detail if it’s not a legendary. However that may just be me being nitpicky. That second one could just be your artstyle.
14 Comments
Hi all, I’d love a bit of feedback on this one, i kept working on this one after i uploaded originally and id love to know if you think this version is better? Im open to any critiques
Looks good, like the shiny.
I think it would help to make the skin a bit less pink
Holy shit it’s rajang (both of these designs are great btw)
I think it could maybe have its hair stylized more like a mohawk or a pompadour and maybe the shiny’s skin could be light blue? Other than that, it looks pretty good!
Looks really cool
I don’t have any issue with the design at all after reading peoples replies. I would say the pompadour would be a good idea.
Though for the sprite by itself, I think the pose could change. My thought is the raise one arm like it’s flexing, have it wink and give it a toothy half grin. It shouts “I’m strong and I know it. Do you want me, or to be me?”
Maybe even make it’s bellybutton grow a bit more bro some buff chest hairs
Ok remember how you were hesitant about exhilerapetion
Well what if I was a flying type with skin flaps it used like a wing suit
And it’s an adrenaline junkie who constantly tries to fly faster and faster in more and more dangerous situations
Love this mon! Muscle beefcake mons are some of my favorites. I love the posing as well.
1. I think the stripes on the ankles are a little arbitrary in terms of cohesion. Maybe some tufts of fur there with a matching patterning to the head would be more distinct?
2. I dont get rock at all from this design, is there something im missing from the aesthetic that evokes mountains or rocks? Mono fighting, fighting normal, and even fighting psychic make sense to me.
3. The diamond on its belly is dope, maybe that design can be implemented on the knees as well? Something to make it look a little more balanced in terms of where our eye is drawn. Either that or possibly even make the hair tuft / neck scruff even bigger to add a cartoonish affect.
Overall this is a great mon design and would go on my Buzzwole Machamp Bewear fighting gym team of bara pokemon anyday
I think it’s perfect. Looks like a real Pokémon!
i thought this was an electric type
Looks nice!
The pre evolution should be inspires by sung wukong
It looks like an electric type and has a bit too much detail if it’s not a legendary. However that may just be me being nitpicky. That second one could just be your artstyle.
one of the coolest fakemon i’ve seen