i want to start selling a "surprise pokemon" cookie box. this is what i have so far but im not entirely in love with it. i will be getting better tape to tape it down and also will get it printed on a better printer once i like how it looks. any ideas on how to make it more appealing?
constructive criticism is welcome but please be kind🥺
by Randomstuffwithleo
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If you’re fine with the cost, sticker paper is better until you can do custom boxes.
Although I’d be careful since Pokemon tends to be pretty outgoing when it comes to making sure people don’t profit off their IP
Shouldnt it say ‘who will you choose?’? And like the other person said, pokemon is very well known for not hesitating to sue
What’s the logic behind the 2 pokeballs and great ball?
I’d get rid of the Great Ball. Starters always come in the standard Pokeball.
Where will you sell from? So I can tell Nintendo /s
Be aware, there’s a decent chance TPC’s lawyers regularly check this sub for stuff exactly like this.
All you need is a white box instead, trust me it does wonders
I am curious where you’re selling them not in a snitch way, but because I wonder if it’s a good plan to have the images of the Pokemon on the back of the box. If you’re at a market for example, where people are walking by and scanning your items, I would recommend putting more information on the front so that it catches their attention.
Because you have 3 different pokeballs on the front, if I was walking by and had no idea what it was, I would probably assume they are pokeball cookies and I have a chance of getting pokeballs or an elusive great ball.
If you’re selling these online or something and it’s otherwise obvious what they are, then disregard what I said!
I think the idea is adorable, also!
There really should be a list of ingredients on the packaging.